Author's Description:
Juneau (Juno) has always come in second; second to her perfect sister, and second to her beautiful best friend, Kansas. Bonded over having weird names, the two quickly became fast friends in kindergarten. From there started a friendship that would last a lifetime, only tested by the one thing that always manages to get between girls: a boy. A story about the cost of love.
Size: 175 KB (34,530 words)
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Cheating
Juneau (Juno) has always come in second; second to her perfect sister, and second to her beautiful best friend, Kansas. Bonded over having weird names, the two quickly became fast friends in kindergarten. From there started a friendship that would last a lifetime, only tested by the one thing that always manages to get between girls: a boy. A story about the cost of love.
Size: 175 KB (34,530 words)
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Cheating
Review by manddscott [other reviews by manddscott]
Reviewed:
A tale of a heroine, but not the one you think it might be. Of forbidden love, and of sacrifice. Of loss, and of the joys and pains of life. This is a story which will make you cry, so prepare yourself for the tears to come.
For plot, a solid A+ (9). The three main characters revealed from youth until life happens.
For technical score, an outstanding 10. It's possible that there were a small number of errors in the story, but the story itself was so compelling I simply can't recall any.
For personal appeal, an A (8). Why not higher? There is so much pain in this story that, as much as I like it, I don't want to experience that hurt again. Great little read, but be prepared.
Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
