Author's Description:
The small town police sergeant retires and goes to work for a private casino. His life changes forever.
Size: 234 KB (46,073 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa
The small town police sergeant retires and goes to work for a private casino. His life changes forever.
Size: 234 KB (46,073 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa
Review by smokeaknz [other reviews by smokeaknz]
Reviewed:
Excellent plot. Some very good characters. Horrible (I mean: really horrible) editing. Typos abound, one full section completely repeated, the reader has to make many assumptions what is meant by some words. But the plot was enough to keep me reading. I probably won't return to this one.
Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 3 | Appeal to Reviewer: 6
