Author's Description:
Ruby is an awkward 23 year old woman who has never had any sexual experiences. She has always felt awkward around men until that day she met Jake, who forever changed her life and made her the domme she is today.
Size: 17 KB (3,530 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, First, Oral Sex
Ruby is an awkward 23 year old woman who has never had any sexual experiences. She has always felt awkward around men until that day she met Jake, who forever changed her life and made her the domme she is today.
Size: 17 KB (3,530 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, First, Oral Sex
Review by gmbusman [other reviews by gmbusman]
Reviewed:
I would suppose some people do sleep with the Adonis they meet for just about the very first time. Maybe I’m being critical, but it does not seem like a typical response from a 23-year-old virgin who’d basically never been kissed. Still, it was a good story, with very few technical faults. But I think it could score higher if the characters were both developed a bit further.
Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7
