Kevie by Jun Tristan
Miranda Lloyd is a single mother who has raised her son since her husband left them almost eight years ago. Now, at age fourteen Kevie's behavior is forcing Miranda to confront the dark lust and painful memories she had locked away since she was abused by her mother and her mother's boyfriend. A short delicious tale of depravity.
Size: 63 KB (12,513 words)
Genre: BDSM
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: mt/Fa, Consensual, Fiction, Incest, Mother, Son, BDSM, DomSub, FemaleDom, Humiliation, Rough, Sadistic, Spanking, Anal Sex, First, Lactation, Spitting
Review by Eddie Davidson [other reviews by Eddie Davidson]
Reviewed:
Great new story, new author.
I am not typically a fan of short stories, but recently I've seen a few that I really like because it was done well. It has a start, middle and end and tells a complete story that evolves all of the main characters.
Femdom stories done well are also quite rare. This is not your typical femdom story by any stretch. It is really a story about something else, where femdom is part of it. If I had to define it, I would say it's about the development of a power-exchange relationship and a mother grappling to understand her son's expression of not only sexuality but affection.
I am not giving anything away in the plot, the story codes tell you that it is femdom - but I think you will really enjoy the way that the author gets there in a short space by starting at the moment she realizes at the start of the story that something is different about her son, and the reasons provided are quite thought provoking.
There is certainly a classic "Electra/Oedipal Complex" somewhere in the dynamics of the relationship. I say Electra because even though daughters develop this for their mothers, I think the femdom aspect of the relationship makes this slightly more like the one a daughter develops for her mother. I am no psychologist, so what do I know?
All I know is that it was a good read. The pacing was excellent, masterful characterization in a short time, and I couldn't find any faults in the technical aspect of writing such as spelling or grammatical.
If Jun is a first time author here, surely they have experience elsewhere as a writer or this is simply a homerun on the first try at bat.
Well done, and if you are a fan of FLR female led relationships that involve the mom in charge, then the appeal is 10. If not, then the appeal is 1, so I'll rank it n/a.
