Jule Vernsk sex-story
Size: 498 KB (98,225 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Science Fiction, Incest, Father, Daughter, First, Pregnancy
Review by John Brave [other reviews by John Brave]
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I've been reading Ale Stone's stories for a while and I enjoy them...
However, this story marks a big change from his normal work. It's a story about a man that builds a time machine and uses it to go back to the time when he was young, and takes advantage of his knowledge.
During his first travels the objective was to take revenge against those who hurt him when he was young, namely his ex-girlfriend who left him without any explanations and to try to understand why she did that. He accomplishes that and then some.
During his travels he bumps into other time travellers and the adventure evolves from a little Scifi stroke piece into a well developped story.
The beginning is a little weak, when the story seemed a little aimless, but after the first few chapters, the story got a solid direction.
This piece marks a breakthrough from the author, and shows a big advance in his work. He managed to develope a fairly complex story plot, yet kept the amount of sex to a very acceptable level, so both things didn't suffer. The quality of the writing showed a leap too.
The story ending is a little weak and could have been a little more developped.
